Spaces

[drippingmind]

So it seems-
that I remain
to be blind;
oblivious with
the whisperings-
stranger’s sounds
with wishes to fill
the open spaces where
freedom reigns.

My heart, indeed
remains to be
longing- not
for a chain or
a golden cage, but
for spaces that
wisdom fills-
lost paradise,
most desired place.

That my soul-
may live, and
not wilt from
the glaring lights of
a rhinestone’s world-
where sweet words are
some mocking snares, and
scrutiny is-
a hidden praise.


Copyright: Leofina Jane G. Galleta
©2009leofinajanegalleta. All Rights Reserved

also posted @:
POETIC WORLD

[messenger]

beautiful write, with an awesome take on the world, indeed.
Excellent perspective, very much enjoyed.
Dave H

[drippingmind]

Originally Posted by messenger

beautiful write, with an awesome take on the world, indeed.
Excellent perspective, very much enjoyed.
Dave H

thanks a lot Dave, for such inspiring words, cheers!:-).

- Jane

[Eagel21]

Drippingmind - first of all pleased to meet you!!!!
Secondly - WOW this is over the top!

Eagel21

[nielly]

Great write

[wordtamer]

Nicely penned
spaces away from the glitter and lies are always more peaceful I think.

[dadio]

Impressive poem.

[drippingmind]

Drippingmind - first of all pleased to meet you!!!!
Secondly - WOW this is over the top! Eagel21

Hi, the pleasure is mine, eagel21, :-). and THANK YOU for such gracious comment, :-).

cheers,
Jane

[drippingmind]

Great write

nice to know you liked it nielly. thanks! :-)

cheers,
Jane

[drippingmind]

Nicely penned
spaces away from the glitter and lies are always more peaceful I think.

Amen to that, johnflournoy, :-). Externalities seem to have the tendency to dominate, if not clout one's judgment sometimes. But thanks to those "open spaces", there would always be that chance to turn back before plunging into the depth of something that one desires less. :-). Thanks a lot! :-)


Cheers,
Jane